i loved this story from beginning to end. I felt like I was on the journeys with you. I especially liked the line about the brother who comes home like a cat after eating a mouse, and he’s ready for a nap on the grass. It would have been nice to have been that mouse. She was already having a sweet sleep, I bet.
I was truly touched by the depth of your friendship with Angeles as portrayed in this piece. The way you describe her with such affection and vivid imagery makes it feel like I've known her for years. Your friendship seems to have weathered the tests of time and distance, and the anecdotes you shared, from the hospital room to the taco truck, paint a picture of a bond that is both enduring and heartwarming.
It's clear that Angeles holds a special place in your heart, and the moments you've shared together, whether they were filled with laughter or tears, have left an indelible mark on both of you. The way you describe the simple act of eating tacos outside a taco truck as a memorable and enjoyable experience is a testament to the beauty of finding joy in the little things in life, especially when shared with a dear friend.
Friendships like yours, where you can simply enjoy each other's company and find humor in everyday moments, are truly precious. It's a reminder of the profound impact that genuine connections can have on our lives. Thank you for sharing this heartwarming story of friendship; it's a reminder to cherish the people who bring laughter and light into our lives. 🌟😊
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I read this last week when I was very sick with a fever and came back to it again today, the fever blessedly behind me, so that I could read this part again:
"She said, “I give the perfect audition, and I always want to get called back, but I don’t always want the part.” I wondered if she meant that about me, because I wonder that with everybody."
These two sentences opened an entire buried house within me. A house I explored in fever dreams for days.
I’ve just finished reading this post about you and your friend, Angeles. I loved reading it and was sorry to reach the end. In this post you’ve managed to bring Angeles to life and introduce her in a warm, and loving way. I hope you will write more about her. I’d love to read it if you do.
“At the border, the passport was gone again. She found it in a pocket of her backpack, where she had already searched. We repeat what we repeat. We see what we are able to see“
This is extremely well done. The impressions of the brothers, Angeles' and your enjoyment of serendipity, all extremely quotable. But the you always are.
I love this, what a beautiful friendship. I felt the warmth between you and the comfort and honesty. So rare! It made me realize that when it happens it almost always happens instantly. Thanks for this!
omg, i love this so much. everything, i kept reading and wanting more. the way you described her brothers, i can see it so clearly just as they are in the photo (hubba hubba alejandro, he is indeed a well-fed cat), the pain of her father's push/pull, all the comedy and frankness, tenderness and serendipity of this friendship. what a beautiful piece. it needs to be in a book. just LOVE.
I love San Miguel. You brought me back reading about it. We are heading to Merida next month which will mark 20 years away from Mexico, my husband says this is unacceptable, lol. we can't let it happen again. Enjoyed this as always Laurie!
i loved this story from beginning to end. I felt like I was on the journeys with you. I especially liked the line about the brother who comes home like a cat after eating a mouse, and he’s ready for a nap on the grass. It would have been nice to have been that mouse. She was already having a sweet sleep, I bet.
Oh, thanks dear Joyce. As you know, what am I gonna write? what am I gonna write? goes on all the time. Nice when a piece connects.
I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop on this friendship. There are some little clues ...
Not at all . . . still going strong.
I was truly touched by the depth of your friendship with Angeles as portrayed in this piece. The way you describe her with such affection and vivid imagery makes it feel like I've known her for years. Your friendship seems to have weathered the tests of time and distance, and the anecdotes you shared, from the hospital room to the taco truck, paint a picture of a bond that is both enduring and heartwarming.
It's clear that Angeles holds a special place in your heart, and the moments you've shared together, whether they were filled with laughter or tears, have left an indelible mark on both of you. The way you describe the simple act of eating tacos outside a taco truck as a memorable and enjoyable experience is a testament to the beauty of finding joy in the little things in life, especially when shared with a dear friend.
Friendships like yours, where you can simply enjoy each other's company and find humor in everyday moments, are truly precious. It's a reminder of the profound impact that genuine connections can have on our lives. Thank you for sharing this heartwarming story of friendship; it's a reminder to cherish the people who bring laughter and light into our lives. 🌟😊
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Thanks, Jonah, very glad you enjoyed the post.
What a lyrical, lovely read—thank you so much for sharing :)
Ah, lovely to hear it gave you pleasure.
I read this last week when I was very sick with a fever and came back to it again today, the fever blessedly behind me, so that I could read this part again:
"She said, “I give the perfect audition, and I always want to get called back, but I don’t always want the part.” I wondered if she meant that about me, because I wonder that with everybody."
These two sentences opened an entire buried house within me. A house I explored in fever dreams for days.
Excellent!
I’ve just finished reading this post about you and your friend, Angeles. I loved reading it and was sorry to reach the end. In this post you’ve managed to bring Angeles to life and introduce her in a warm, and loving way. I hope you will write more about her. I’d love to read it if you do.
I’m delighted that you enjoyed it. I might just do that.
“At the border, the passport was gone again. She found it in a pocket of her backpack, where she had already searched. We repeat what we repeat. We see what we are able to see“
Wonderful amazing writing.
Thanks so much!
This is extremely well done. The impressions of the brothers, Angeles' and your enjoyment of serendipity, all extremely quotable. But the you always are.
Thanks so much. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
Another great read, in particular, loved the descriptions of the siblings and Angeles’ family. You’ve had some wonderful adventures!
Thanks, Andrew, very glad to know you’re enjoying the stack.
I love this, what a beautiful friendship. I felt the warmth between you and the comfort and honesty. So rare! It made me realize that when it happens it almost always happens instantly. Thanks for this!
I think you're right. Chemistry in all relationships. Thanks for enjoying it.
omg, i love this so much. everything, i kept reading and wanting more. the way you described her brothers, i can see it so clearly just as they are in the photo (hubba hubba alejandro, he is indeed a well-fed cat), the pain of her father's push/pull, all the comedy and frankness, tenderness and serendipity of this friendship. what a beautiful piece. it needs to be in a book. just LOVE.
Thanks, honey, and you and Angeles would be such a perfect match. Maybe we all hang out together in NO . . . not that far from Houston.
i would love that. xx
I love San Miguel. You brought me back reading about it. We are heading to Merida next month which will mark 20 years away from Mexico, my husband says this is unacceptable, lol. we can't let it happen again. Enjoyed this as always Laurie!
Thanks! I wish we were going with you. Enjoy.
very well done!
Many thanks!